The Tom Veitch Files

[circled: 81] * * * * Here we tell the parallel story of Vima Sunrider, and the events that occur during Ulic’s year of confinement: Vima Sunrider and her mother Nomi Sunrider go after the new Dark Lord of the Sith. (They know now who he is.) [margin: [struck: [uncertain: Have it again?]] No.] [margin: the DLOTS has surfaced on Onderon.] [struck: We see the awakening of Naga Sadow from "the second cocoon". (We indicate he awakened once before, in the time of Freedon Nadd.)] [margin: later] Master Thon, Odan Urr, and others get involved. Vima and Nomi lead a mission to Onderon, to uproot the warlord brothers, who have embraced the Sith teachings -- or become servants of the new Dark Lord. [struck: (I presume the new Dark Lord wants to make Onderon his base. That is why he went there in the first place.)] The Kiras and the Jedi fight alongside. * While Vima is away at the conflict, the new Dark Lord finds Ulic, shackled in the compound of the old Jedi Master. He believes Ulic to be a rival for the title of Dark Lord of the Sith. [margin: If they are fighting him on Onderon, why would he be after Ulic? What if Ulic is a prisoner on the [uncertain: ship?] [uncertain: Alakin’s?] great ships. — This D.M. has a really big ship which we see orbiting Onderon in the beginning -- when they flee, he go to his ship — He doesn’t use a planet -- He tours the Galaxy endlessly on two "generation ships".] * Released from captivity, Ulic proves himself, fighting alongside the apprentices of the old Jedi Master, and defeating the new Dark Lord, who runs off with his tail between his legs. [margin, cropped text on facing page: [illegible] [illegible] [uncertain: Saga?]) [uncertain: the ending?] [illegible] [uncertain: of N.S.?]]