The Tom Veitch Files

[margin, top edge: [illegible]] Nomi Sunrider is also at the meeting, and we learn of her mission and/or her approaching initiation as a Jedi Master. [inserted: This issue needs more action > See below -- Ulic escapes] * * * [struck: ISSUE #3] * Almost as soon as they arrive at the old Jedi’s world, Ulic escapes, with the help of his female cohort, and returns to his bounty hunter life. [Or, he gets involved in some other plot aspect, for instance he goes to Yavin IV to hide, and while there he discovers the cocoon of Naga Sadow.] [margin: action plotting If he goes to Yavin IV, then don't lose Ossus scene. Rather Ulic, condemned by the Jedi Council, escapes -- Goes to Yavin IV (why --? needs more reason Something he cannot [uncertain: say?] is there.] * Ulic is hunted by everyone -- the Republic, the Jedi, and by the old Jedi who is his new Master. Vima Sunrider plays an important role in Ulic’s recapture. The new Dark Lord also makes an appearance, and has confrontation with Ulic. {this could be expanded} [margin: Issue ends w/ confrontation between Vima & Ulic / [uncertain: the cracking?] of the cocoon of N.S. Issue #3 - Vima & Ulic battle -- Ulic is captured.] * Recaptured by the old Jedi, Ulic is simply shackled to a huge beast who acts as his guardian... and becomes his friend. Ulic is given a Holocron, to increase his knowledge. [margin: *] The Holocron teaches him the long history of the Jedi...stuff he has never known until now. Vima also befriends him. (Is she in charge of him? Does she bring him his food?) She sees a ray of good in him, and uses her own power to move him back towards the Light. [margin: He resents her.] [margin: [illegible]] [far right edge, cropped text: [illegible]]