The Tom Veitch Files

[circled: 76] * A river, that runs through the city, carries bodies downstream from a great battle, into the wilderness domain of the Kira clan... Modon Kira and his wife Galia fly over the river, away from the city, towards the protection of the fortress of his forefathers. [margin: Beast-riders of Onderon attack [uncertain: warlord invaders?]] * With Queen Galia safe, Kira and his beast-riders go into the skies over Onderon, to attack the low-flying ships of the invaders. This could be a neat scene, with beast-riders blasting gunners on open decks and/or landing their beasts on the hulls of sealed ships, the beasts tear their way through the hulls with tooth and claw. * Cut to Vima Sunrider and her old Master, [struck: who were in IzIz before the invasion began and] [inserted: [uncertain: Tracked?] by the dark Jedi, they] are [struck: now] trapped in the midst of the carnage. As Jedi, they battle bravely and with force powers. But they are captured and dragged before one of the brother warlords. The warlord takes a fancy to young Vima, he wants to kill the old man and make her one of his concubines. But Vima demonstrates what she has become -- she saves her Master and is instrumental in the death of the warlord. [margin: Vima & her old master are trapped in the midst of the battle, Captured & dragged before the warlord — Warlord wants to make Vima one of his concubines. But Vima saves her master & kills the warlord]