The Tom Veitch Files

[margin, red: Show the [uncertain: valiant's?] pg 3 [uncertain: plan in action?]] * What does Onderon have that they want? Perhaps they are nomads who seek a great fortress city for their headquarters. They also might be after Sith artifacts, Freedon Nadd’s body, [margin, red: probably not? See Below] or they might [struck: want to] [inserted, red: also] capture the flying warbeasts for use in [struck: battle.] [margin, red: their own army.] [struck: Or] perhaps [inserted, red: also] Onderon has unexploited natural resources. [struck: Or, better yet,] [inserted, red: But in actuality] the invasion might be in the service of the new Dark Lord of the Sith, who has replaced Exar Kun. [struck: (Perhaps] they [inserted, red: and we] don’t know he is the new Dark Lord, and the Dark Lord is incognito at the moment, because of the attention on the DLOTS caused by the Sith War. Also...he is keeping his identity secret until he can find and kill Ulic Qel-Droma... So why not have him do a walk- on in the beginning?) [margin, red: Could be a deal -- the dark Jedi provides Technology left over from the war -- he’s an “arms dealer” as far as we know at first] [margin, red: part of his [uncertain: ulterior motive?] on conquering Onderon is that it was a [uncertain: planet ruled?] by Freedon Nadd + the Sith [uncertain: teachings for 4 centuries.?]] [margin, red: [We reveal who he is (or give a clue) when he lands on the Dxun moon & exhumes the body of Nadd.]] [inserted, red, above “Vima”: (NAME)] * Vima Sunrider and Vima’s Master are in Iziz following this man. He should be a Jedi, one of the ones who swore allegiance to Exar Kun. He supposedly disavowed Exar Kun, but he has been acting strange since the war, gathering Sith artifacts. [margin, red, arrow from “this man.”: Name him.] [margin, red, bracket and arrow: move to here] (If Vima’s old Master is not a character from earlier stories, then make him Master Arca’s Master. Otherwise, it is someone totally new.) Vima Sunrider is a young woman Jedi, about age twenty, daughter of Nomi Sunrider. [margin, pencil: a new Dark lord has [uncertain: arisen?] - keeping himself secret until he can find & kill Ulic-Qel Droma] [margin, pencil: Vima Sunrider -- a young woman Jedi -- is traveling [uncertain: thru?] DLOS w/ her master]