The Tom Veitch Files

[circled: [uncertain: 44?]] * The bounty hunter [name] and his girlfriend enter and sit by themselves. There is a confrontation, or a duel with a vicious bounty hunter [struck: (such as Gorm the Dissolver)], who tries to steal a Sith bauble the woman [name] has around her neck. [name] takes the would-be robber out with a lightsaber. [inserted: ([uncertain: whom he rescues for the 1st time?]).] [margin: After the Sith War Ulic became a freelance bounty hunter] * The other hunters whisper about [name] -- "they say he used to be a Jedi..." [inserted: --] [struck: (]In fact, he is Ulic Qel-Droma, fifteen years after his defeat in The Sith War.[struck: )] * * * * Elsewhere in the Galaxy, several warlords have run amok, invading other systems, pillaging unprotected worlds of their treasure. We cut to an invasion, in progress, of the planet Onderon. A great battle as powerful brother warlords and their space fleet attack the great walled city. [margin: medieval [uncertain: lawlessness?] -- warlords are pillaging planets [circled: + space pirates]] These warlords [struck: would be high- tech,] us[struck: ing] some unique antique technology. (DaVinci period? Jules Verne?) [margin: + [uncertain: interesting?]] [Adjacent page, cropped at right:] * th al fo he TH ar or [struck: th] [struck: ba] [struck: or] un [struck: or] mi ne ha th Da in be DE Al id fi So or * Ma th or al su bu si ar (I Ch th Ma so Vi Je da