The Tom Veitch Files

[margin: 98 (circled)] * Through a combination of fortune and choice, Ulic and his cohort find themselves in convergence with the old Jedi Master, Vima Sunrider, and the [struck: high-tech] warriors who are chasing them. [Needs to be an interesting location. Perhaps the new Jedi planet.] [margin: Vima & Master <[uncertain: name?]> [uncertain: land?] -- for a meeting of Jedi Masters -- The warlord's top three men arrive shortly [uncertain: thereafter?] -- Ulic learns of the bounty from him.] Ulic saves the old Jedi and Vima. We think perhaps he has turned back to the Light. {same ideas as earlier} But then he takes the old Jedi and Vima prisoner, and says he is going to turn them in for the bounty. [margin: BIG FIGHT in [uncertain: Nerys VIII?] -- Could be the giant Jedi we see in Lightsider? No.] * But the old Jedi turns the tables on Ulic, and takes him prisoner. "I know who you are, Qel-Droma. You are wanted for justice by your family and by the Republic." * The old Jedi sends Ulic’s female cohort packing. Then he and Vima and another Jedi take Ulic to Alderaan, to the estate of Ulic’s father. [margin: the flight to Alderaan,] * A tremendous scene between Ulic and his father. Ulic’s father cannot forgive him for the death of Cay...and for Ulic’s terrible crimes against the Jedi. Ulic has been placed under a death sentence by his own family or by the ruling family of Alderaan. Ulic’s father will not go against the ruling: "You will die, my son. This must be." [Adjacent page, cropped right edge:] * [illegible] o[illegible] c[illegible] s[illegible] m[illegible] c[illegible] b[illegible] T[illegible] b[illegible] A[illegible] a[illegible] a[illegible] b[illegible] J[illegible] r[illegible] T[illegible] t[illegible] d[illegible] * [illegible] i[illegible] o[illegible] t[illegible] o[illegible] a[illegible] J[illegible] e[illegible] T[illegible] J[illegible] i[illegible] A[illegible] D[illegible] t[illegible] c[illegible] a[illegible] c[illegible] y[illegible] * [illegible] h[illegible] p[illegible] g[illegible] h[illegible]