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Dark Lords working notebook
[circled: 50]
[margin, red ink: [uncertain: The monks, per KA's book + McQuarrie's?]
art are a group sympathetic to
the Jedi. they knew Obi-Wan
+ perhaps have some of his stuff.
Bring in Jawas, sandcrawlers, sandpeople.]
* Leia, Vima, and the
children journey to Tatooine,
to hide in a monastery (see
Kevin’s book). There Vima
translates the book of Jedi
Battle Mediation, and teaches
Leia about the ancient battle
art.
* When the Emperor traces
her to Tatooine, Luke and his
Jedi must rush to save her.
[margin, red ink: ([uncertain: they tweak his flagship (Leavy Bros)?])]
* The Emperor’s huge
flagship orbits Tatooine. As
Solusar, Wedge, and Lando
prepare a commando mission to
take or destroy the ship, Rayf,
Brand, and Luke go to protect
Leia.
* Option of space battle
over Tatooine, the capture of
the ship.
[margin, red ink: What about the "shield [uncertain: cruisers?]"?]
* In the monastery, the
Emperor gets in undetected,
with the help of Jawa traders
and/or sandpeople. He goes
alone, or with one assistant.
He is unafraid, full of power.
He fully intends to take the
child...or else die in this
place and inhabit the child.
Merciless confrontations with
the disguised Emperor:
Brand vs. the Emperor. The
Emperor strips away his
prosthetic gear and leaves him
defenseless, then brutally
annihilates Brand.
Rayf vs. the Emperor. Rayf has
a very special lightsaber, one
that was found under Master Ood
on Ossus. In a lightsaber
battle with the Emperor he is
defeated and killed.
[margin, red ink: Kills Rayf right in front of Leia]
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