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The Tom Veitch Files

Yale’s Beinecke Library 1016 photographs

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Dark Lords working notebook

[circled: 40] Threepio and Artoo are instrumental in uncovering the Imperial spy who is working as a Rebel Technician on Nespis VIII. [margin: How? Artoo catches the spy sending a message & tells 3-PO -] The spy is interrogated and defiantly reveals that the city is doomed. [margin: "[uncertain: Nuthin'?] you can do about it."] The Rebels know about the Galaxy Gun (after all, it blew up Pinnacle Base in DEII), so they immediately initiate an evacuation of the space city...just in time! [margin: FIRST MISSILE GOES RIGHT THROUGH THE CITY, DESTROYING STRUCTURE, HITS [uncertain: STARFLEET?] BEYOND & BLOWS. They'd also try to shoot down the missile -- maybe hit one, but another gets thru.] As the Rebel ships scatter to hyperspace, a missile comes out of hyperspace and blasts the Nespis space city to smithereens. [margin: Where do they evacuate to? Ossus? Onderon? Are they pursued across the Galaxy? A fast-moving hunt... a [uncertain: veiled?] [uncertain: climax?] as [uncertain: they approach.?] Brings "energy [uncertain: clashes?]" [uncertain: and?] in space battles for survival. What about "[uncertain: anger improving their future?]" (see [uncertain: prev.?] [uncertain: article?])] * Cut to the Emperor. He's getting some bad news from his doctors: the aging of his clone body is accelerating. It was an inferior clone, a "reject" that was left after Luke destroyed all the best clones in Dark Empire I. [margin: Emp talks about the terror of being adrift w/o a body... he doesn't want to do that again... [uncertain: the d.s.?] not a friendly place... he lacks multidimensional transference.] The doctor/magi predict that he has only a few months to live before he must take a new clone. [margin: What if Emp is having a mental breakdown? What if Korriban is a place he goes to Commune w/ the dark side... he "draws nourishment" there ?? "I will live forever." His adepts may have already [uncertain: fetched?] Ysanna DNA.] Palpatine wants to improve his line of clones. He wants to introduce genetic material from a Jedi bloodline. [quote the "genetic" permission] Towards that goal, he sends [inserted: (]his seven[inserted: )] Dark Jedi to Ossus, to bring back Ysanna, who are descended from Jedi. He especially wants their chiefs. [margin: or 4 of them ([uncertain: perhaps?] already sent out as we open)] But what he really wants is Leia's third child, Anakin. He wants the Skywalker heritage because it will mean the [margin: He wants his holocron too. [boxed: What if, to inhabit a living child (not a clone) he needs new D.S. knowledge or a legendary Sith power object. He journeys to Korriban (or Yavin 4) to find it. Or else his men bring it to him... But it has a hidden [uncertain: danger?]]] [margin: He might need to take the child to the Valley of the Dark Lords] [adjacent page, cropped: [illegible] [illegible] [illegible] " S [illegible] [illegible] a En sp if Je to * in Leia ord its on. con of mas dest conc As P droi Gala journ stars * Leia insta caught chiefs Or, a been sells Rebels Or, a Onderon an Imp resent failing supplie (incomp]

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The Tom Veitch Files

On August 18, 2026, Praxis visited Yale’s Beinecke Rare Book and Manuscript Library and photographed 1016 pages from the Tom Veitch papers. This collection brings those early drafts, unused stories, correspondence, and handwritten notes together for everyone to explore.

YCAL MSS 1368 · Boxes 3, 5, 42, 76, and 77

Box 3
Dark Empire and Tales of the Jedi correspondence, proposals, and annotated drafts.
Box 5
Lucasfilm approvals, contracts, Kevin J. Anderson correspondence, and audio adaptation material.
Box 42
Tales of the Jedi and Dark Lords of the Sith proposals, scripts, artwork, and proofs.
Box 76
Handwritten Star Wars drafts and the Log X notebook.
Box 77
Dark Empire, Dark Lords of the Sith, and Tales of the Jedi notebooks and plots.

The descriptions above follow Yale’s finding aid. These photographs are a selection from those boxes; individual images have not yet been assigned to exact boxes and folders. Image numbers follow photography order, with occasional gaps.

These are working papers: some ideas were approved, some changed, and some never reached publication. Most transcriptions are automatic; checked passages use the corrected text.

There’s plenty to explore. Have fun looking!