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The Tom Veitch Files

Yale’s Beinecke Library 1016 photographs

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Darksider, Ulic & The Jedi Chronicles

[circled: 60] It could be asked whether Lucas himself has a coherent vision of the SW Saga, beyond the simplistic [uncertain: events?] of the three films (ANH, ESB, ROTJ). [struck: All] Even these three films coalesce around images, and "bits" or idea-sequences involving interesting characters + special effects. The "plot", such as it is, is a pastiche of old storybook themes, gathered from dozens of sources, and injected with a massive dose of enthusiasm and film-making skills. One doesn't come away from ROTJ with the sense one has watched a drama of great and profound themes, despite the mythological element. Indeed the watery ending, in which the great Darth Vader is "redeemed" is unconvincing and feels "off". This character, who has [struck: [illegible]] enslaved + [uncertain: murder?] millions, is let off with a smile and a tear -- as long as he showed a bit of heart and a bit of love for his son (who he had earlier condemned to darkness, + whose arm he had severed) -- he is allowed to join the great Master Yoda + Obi-wan Kenobi, in the valhalla of light beyond death. Dramatically, and mythologically, one would have expected a greater element of justice at the end. This mass murderer could have paid some some heavy dues.--

Read alongside the photograph, especially for handwritten passages. Bracketed notes may mark uncertain or illegible text.

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The Tom Veitch Files

On August 18, 2026, Praxis visited Yale’s Beinecke Rare Book and Manuscript Library and photographed 1016 pages from the Tom Veitch papers. This collection brings those early drafts, unused stories, correspondence, and handwritten notes together for everyone to explore.

YCAL MSS 1368 · Boxes 3, 5, 42, 76, and 77

Box 3
Dark Empire and Tales of the Jedi correspondence, proposals, and annotated drafts.
Box 5
Lucasfilm approvals, contracts, Kevin J. Anderson correspondence, and audio adaptation material.
Box 42
Tales of the Jedi and Dark Lords of the Sith proposals, scripts, artwork, and proofs.
Box 76
Handwritten Star Wars drafts and the Log X notebook.
Box 77
Dark Empire, Dark Lords of the Sith, and Tales of the Jedi notebooks and plots.

The descriptions above follow Yale’s finding aid. These photographs are a selection from those boxes; individual images have not yet been assigned to exact boxes and folders. Image numbers follow photography order, with occasional gaps.

These are working papers: some ideas were approved, some changed, and some never reached publication. Most transcriptions are automatic; checked passages use the corrected text.

There’s plenty to explore. Have fun looking!