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Early Sith questions & Freedon Nadd
SWDE III
159.
Leia + Han [uncertain: trace?] Emperor to "[uncertain: LWOTSiK?]"
Han is nearly killed ... Falcon nearly destroyed.
Valley of the Dark Lords -
[margin: massive ruins
w/ statues carved out
of mountains.]
How to bring in Hutts, mercenaries, spies, etc.
The Emp should be close to moving into young Anakin
when Leia gets to him -
Who kills the Emp - "Strike me down, etc..." ?
[margin: does he say
that to
Leia?]
[inserted: How? How hurt by Emp?]
Anakin is saved ... but do we leave a question in the
reader's mind about whether the Emp is in him?
~ Luke's love - [struck: interest] - - {seems to be an arbitrary idea
w/o much plot effect. How can we intensify it?
What if the Emp kills her? [inserted: (or one of the D.J.'s)]
What if many Jedi face-off w/ Emp +
he kills a number of them.
[margin: Boy Jedi
Kam Solusar
Vima
Disabled Jedi]
Indeed, it is part of his plan to draw them to
this place of Dark Side power [inserted: that only he]
knows about -- A place where he draws
nourishment --
~ Blow up Byss with Super Weapon? -- change
its co-ordinates w/ matter transmitter?
[margin: [illegible]]
[margin: [uncertain: F?]]
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