Praxium

The Tom Veitch Files

Yale’s Beinecke Library 1016 photographs

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Early Sith questions & Freedon Nadd

[handwritten header, black ink, underlined: Tales of the Jedi #6 (PLOTS #0)] [handwritten in red: (Double Issue)] [page number: 143] Issue #6: "The Freedon Nadd Uprising" * [underlined: Oss Wilum] arrives at [underlined: Onderon] with [underlined: Tott Doneeta]. Fresh conflict has erupted in the city of [underlined: Iziz], as a group of Dark Siders foments rebellion against the new unified government. The Dark Siders are part of a [underlined: Freedon Nadd cult] that includes a large part of the population. Important military leaders are members of this cult. [underlined: Master Arca] is in a quandary -- as he attempts to meditate the battles, he is meeting a powerful Dark Side force that is confounding his efforts. * [underlined: Galia], the new Queen of Onderon, reveals that her father, [underlined: King Ommin], who is enfeebled and being kept alive in a life-support facility, may possibly be behind the Dark Side influx. Arca and several Jedi warriors have to fight their way to the old man, who has been removed by the Naddists to a secret location deep under the city -- where he is being protected by vicious guards. The pitiful old man pretends to be a prisoner and a helpless invalid - then, when Arca's guard is down, he unleashes a terrible blast of Dark Side power, knocking Master Arca into a coma! [right margin, red ink: brace labeled (A)] Immediately Dark Side troops take Arca prisoner and drive [underlined: Ulic Qel- Droma] and the others back to the surface. Ulic and the other Jedi realize that, despite his crippled condition, Galia's father is a powerful Dark Side magus who is behind the "[underlined: Freedon Nadd Uprising]"! [right margin, red ink: brace labeled (B)] [right-hand handwritten notes, red ink except where noted:] need walls to keep out the beasts -- but 2 cultures in open communication. Freedon Nadd cult takes advantage of the situation Covert operations & [uncertain: maybe Dark Force energy?] -- open w/ preparations to take F. Nadd to Dxun. A ship being prepared -- his body in a sealed stone coffin -- [uncertain: Cultists?] try to steal it -- do steal it. Fires in many parts of the city... terrorist acts / rioting ... [inserted in black: (looting] Social order breaking down. Arca has sent for help -- other Jedis arriving {Can be a whole group} Must get Nadd & Amanoa off planet! After [uncertain: cultists?] steal Nadd's body, Galia breaks down + reveals the truth about her father -- Arca visits him in [uncertain: "nursing home"?]. [circled A] [circled B] [circled C] -- Ulic has to call for help need lots of Jedi & the Republic as well

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The Tom Veitch Files

On August 18, 2026, Praxis visited Yale’s Beinecke Rare Book and Manuscript Library and photographed 1016 pages from the Tom Veitch papers. This collection brings those early drafts, unused stories, correspondence, and handwritten notes together for everyone to explore.

YCAL MSS 1368 · Boxes 3, 5, 42, 76, and 77

Box 3
Dark Empire and Tales of the Jedi correspondence, proposals, and annotated drafts.
Box 5
Lucasfilm approvals, contracts, Kevin J. Anderson correspondence, and audio adaptation material.
Box 42
Tales of the Jedi and Dark Lords of the Sith proposals, scripts, artwork, and proofs.
Box 76
Handwritten Star Wars drafts and the Log X notebook.
Box 77
Dark Empire, Dark Lords of the Sith, and Tales of the Jedi notebooks and plots.

The descriptions above follow Yale’s finding aid. These photographs are a selection from those boxes; individual images have not yet been assigned to exact boxes and folders. Image numbers follow photography order, with occasional gaps.

These are working papers: some ideas were approved, some changed, and some never reached publication. Most transcriptions are automatic; checked passages use the corrected text.

There’s plenty to explore. Have fun looking!